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amandajean

Editor by day, writer by night, shameless weirdo 24/7. I read things when I'm not editing them.

Currently reading

Stranger in a Strange Land
Robert A. Heinlein
The Number of the Beast
Robert A. Heinlein
The Land of Night
Kirby Crow
Cross Bones
B. Snow, E.S. Douglas, Juan Kenobi, K.J. Johnson, Ellen Holiday, Rebecca Cohen, Piper Vaughn, Maggie Lee, Riley Shane, Cooper West, K.R. Foster, M.J. O'Shea, Jana Denardo, Cornelia Grey, Emily Moreton
Irregulars
Astrid Amara, Nicole Kimberling, Ginn Hale, Josh Lanyon
Working It Out - Sean Michael Agreed with another reviewer--the word "baby" is used way, way too much, and it started to yank me out of the story. There were also a few minor errors ("than" instead of "then," things like that) that soured my enjoyment as well. A better edit would have bumped this up to a 2.5 or maybe a 3 from a 2. The writer has potential.